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I just realized there is a redundant line in panel 4, and there is no reason for Beys to have 2 word balloon pointers in the last panel. I may tweak that in the next collection.
Funny what you see later.
Regarding the redundant line — you just had a lot of slaughter on your mind, and you wanted to make sure the readers didn’t forget that pile of dead children, all slaughtered by cold-hearted slaughter.
It could be worse, Colleen. But it isn’t.
LOL! I totally slaughtered that line! What a slaughter! Slaughtery slaughter!
I don’t think it is redundant. She’s talking about two different slaughters: The Choosing, where hundreds of kids are killed because they aren’t useful or perhaps even “dangerous” and the slaughter committed on various worlds where they enslave races.
Does mamid get a No-Prize?
Allan, you’re so funny. You SLAUGHTER me!
@Mamid: good point, I just think it would sound more euphonious had I chosen a different word.
I’d love an El-Ron. But I won’t qualify for one of those till next year’s V-Con.