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There is way too much shone on Bast’s lips in the last panel.
shone? shine? whatever. I thought it was her making her lips pumpadilicious so she can work her bubble breasts magic on him
OOPS! SHINE!
Can’t you just hear her saying “My lips are as ripe as pomegranate.”
It worked for Anne Baxter.
It’s difficult to place a word balloon gracefully in a close-up panel, as in panel seven. Here it’s an implied tear.
I hoped people would feel a little of Bast’s pain here. Maybe understand why she can be so unpleasant.
I know Bast is a smokin’ babe, but it looks a bit literal in panel 4..!
LOL!
I regret using some of these tone sheets.
Is it weird that I think this page is kinda hot?
Nope. It’s hot.
“I hoped people would feel a little of Bast’s pain here.”
To be honest, my first instinct was to assume she was lying in order to get out of being scanned. I guess I’m just overly cynical.
She could very well still be lying, but you should still feel pain here. If she’s a good liar, that is.