A Distant Soil: Seasons of Spring Page 19
The cut from the last scene to this is very abrupt. I need to add a page.
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The cut from the last scene to this is very abrupt. I need to add a page.
Also, art for sale on ebay including some seriously vintage art by me!
13 Comments
Michael P. Stein
FWIW, I had no problem with the cut.
Queen Ynci
Aeren with a proper, grown up, EARTH job. Wonder how teaching works out on the ‘stress-ometer’ against crystal cutting….and did he have as many swooning fe/males back then? 😀
KC
One of my favorite pages – my most favorite is coming up! 😉
RabidEwok
Aeren, the Galactic Wide Heartthrob!
Colleen
He’s too sexy for this GALAXY! Too sexy for this GALAXY! Too Sexayy!
Kaylen/Kayeri
Hm… if you want a transition, what about a single panel view of the school, perhaps?
StoryWriter
He’s to sexy for any Galaxy!
Colleen
Kaylen, I can’t just add a panel to a page that is already full. I have to add another page if you want to expand the narrative.
Sarah Beach
Well, you could actually show him dropping the twins at their school, and Jason wherever it is he’s planted for the day. Then this school…..
Just a suggestion. I’m happy as is. 😀
Stampers Saverem
*Ohhhhh!
The Little Floating Hearts are just ADORABLE!
dkkauwe
Just shoot for the stars-
If it feels right-
It goes like this:
http://youtu.be/iEPTlhBmwRg
jourell
Rereading this after so long, and look like Aeren has the same problem ol’ Dr Jones does…. students who wish he’d give them a private lesson in biology.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lQg7QKDButo
Colleen Doran
HA! Imagine the trouble an angelically handsome teacher like Aeren would face!