A DISTANT SOIL: The Ascendant Chapter 4 Page 13
O noble and wondrous Torsten Adair, you grace my humble talents with your patronage! I am bloated with acceptance!!! Thank you for your uber-generosity! Your hat tip brains me with shekels!
O noble and wondrous Torsten Adair, you grace my humble talents with your patronage! I am bloated with acceptance!!! Thank you for your uber-generosity! Your hat tip brains me with shekels!
13 Comments
Colleen
There is way too much shone on Bast’s lips in the last panel.
mamid
shone? shine? whatever. I thought it was her making her lips pumpadilicious so she can work her bubble breasts magic on him
Colleen
OOPS! SHINE!
Can’t you just hear her saying “My lips are as ripe as pomegranate.”
It worked for Anne Baxter.
Carla Speed McNeil
It’s difficult to place a word balloon gracefully in a close-up panel, as in panel seven. Here it’s an implied tear.
Colleen
I hoped people would feel a little of Bast’s pain here. Maybe understand why she can be so unpleasant.
Allan
I know Bast is a smokin’ babe, but it looks a bit literal in panel 4..!
Colleen
LOL!
I regret using some of these tone sheets.
raycornwall
Is it weird that I think this page is kinda hot?
Colleen
Nope. It’s hot.
JKCarrier
“I hoped people would feel a little of Bast’s pain here.”
To be honest, my first instinct was to assume she was lying in order to get out of being scanned. I guess I’m just overly cynical. 😉
Colleen
She could very well still be lying, but you should still feel pain here. If she’s a good liar, that is.
Colleen Doran
UPDATED
Jeremy_A
Jaw dropping page!