A DISTANT SOIL: The Ascendant Chapter 2 Page 11

I think my art is a little too “clean line” over these pages.

Also, the transition between this page and last is abrupt. I think a big, flashy attractive splash page would have been better for pacing.

And I don’t know what I was thinking using that zip tone pattern in the last panel. Whoa.

Whatever.

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